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You have Arthritis, Ok Doc, Now What?  [E]
This about Arthritis and what it is and what it is not. It is part 1 of a 2 part article.
by Analapine
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.


Title: You have Arthritis, Ok Doc, Now What?

First Impression: The first paragraph of this article hooked me with the statement that arthritis is not single disease.

What needs your attention: In this heading, {font:times}Diagnosing Arthritis, the font needs your attention. I also suggest that the author include links that the reader can click on to go the the arthritis website.

What part I liked best: I like the list of managing options the author placed under Degenerative Arthritis because they give me more options I can use to deal with my Osteoarthritis. I especially like the over-the-counter pain medication suggestion, which I will discuss with one of my specialist the next time I see him.

Overall impression: This educational and thought provoking article deals with the different types of arthritis experienced by adults and children across the world. It gives names the more common types of arthritis and gives coping mechanisms. The author encourages people, who may be dealing with this problem, to contact their primary care doctor for a specific diagnosis. I enjoyed reading this intriguing article. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

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