House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

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My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Sardine Sandwiches and Whales

First Impression: The title and description of this medical article aroused my curiosity. I wanted to know more about the Lactose Intolerant Grilled Cheese Sandwich.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention. I did not find anything in this well-written article confusing or unclear.

What part I liked best: I like several things about this article. First, I like the title because it aroused my curiosity and caused me to read this item. Second, I like the explanation and examples given of points of view, especial the Third Person Omniscient point of view.

Overall impression: I found the subject of this article educational, thought provoking, and funny, which means I learned something from it. The informal language used made this article easy to read. After reading this article I felt encouraged to attempt the Third Person Omniscient point of view again. I am giving this wonderful article a 5.0 because of its educational value. Anyone who is unclear about first person or third person points of view should read this article. Write on.


Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .