Hi Charlie ~ I am here to review as part of a challenge but I also want to thank you for your time and dedication in helping with GoT. We surely appreciate it!

How the writing made me feel: "Little Secrets" is a wonderful poem. It reminds me of all the hidden notes I have found over the years and also the notes I have left behind in hopes that my children will some day find them. The poem is well written and brings life to the folded down corners of the books that patiently await the next person to take an adventure inside.

Can I relate to the writing through a personal experience? Yes, these hidden treasures are a treasured keepsake from times past and times yet to come.

Did the plot interest me? Yes, I enjoy that grandma has taken the time to leave these notes in expectation that someone will come along and read her favorite books and find the secrets "love" notes she left for them.

Were the characters believable? From the point of view of hidden little secrets, yes, I think this is traditional and believable. Ebooks would never replace real books in my family for reasons such as this.

Did the item flow naturally? Yes, exceptionally written.

What I liked most: I like that you have taken something as simple as leaving a note in a book or a turned down page and turned it into a well written poem that drives home the value of so many topics: love, adventure, family, etc.

What I liked least: Nothing

Did anything stand out? Your passion for taking an adventure through the power of WRITTEN WORDS.

Is there anything I would change within the writing? Not really.

Was the writing memorable? Absolutely. this poem spoke deeply to me.

Please keep in mind these comments are strictly my opinion and should be taken as such. Please never change anything that you are not comfortable with changing!!




Thank you for sharing and Write-On!!


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Game of Thrones  (13+) Returning in April - Prep starts March 1st #456789 by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm

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