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Review by Angel_Eyes
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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#456789 by Gaby ~ Keeper Of The Realm



Overall Impression: Oh how true the words of this poem are. The people who think they are better, or the people we feel are better. Regardless of the scenario, there is a name that will cause us all to break. Whether it is of love lost or pain or the death of a loved one.. We are all human and no matter the image we put out there or the way we are perceived, we all have a memory that will cause us to hit or knees. I was impressed to see this was inspired by a friend here on the site. What a lovely tribute to honor that person's feelings or thoughts.

Poetic Tool Box: The freestyle flow for this poem works well. Is an easy read with an obvious message.

Punctuation/Grammar/Spelling: I did not take note of any errors in your poem.

Parting Comments: Inspiration comes in many forms, I was not surprised to find this poem in your port as I have read a wide variety of items from you. What I am surprised by and impressed with at the same time is how versatile you are. You have impressive poetry, short stories, flash fiction, essays, and more; yet, you do exceedingly well with all of it. I hope you will be encouraged to keep seeking out things that keep you writing! Job well done!


You can play,
You can lie,
But WE will find you,
and YOU will die!

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