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 |  | The Stroll  [ASR] Even for Soul collectors, a mother's love is eternal!  |
| (5.0)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation  OVERALL IMPRESSION - I wasn't able to see the picture prompt, but it really wasn't necessary. After leaving the bookstore she was completely drawn to the store across the way, almost as if it were calling out to her. WHAT I LIKED BEST - I liked that a mother's love is eternal and never goes away. You showed that with the woman pushing the baby stroller through the mall, and fighting to the get the wheel unstuck from the doorway. When she goes into the store, you set the scene well with the smoke of incense, the clearing, and the nice aromas coming from the store. PLOT~ A different take on crossing over to the other side. It was interesting and showed that when your number's up, it can happen anywhere. The mall is the last place I'd expect helpers to wait to carry out the task, but one really does never know. CHARACTERS~ The woman whose time has come. She doesn't bother talking to her lover who is engrossed in books, so she decides to venture off on her own. Willy and Jordan who discuss how difficult it was for the woman to let go. Jordan is a bit confused, but Willy is there to help him understand better. DIALOG~ Dialog worked well between Willy and his protege. Jordan still has questions and Willy's knowledge showed as he spoke about a mother's love, helping him understand more fully and how things will be when his mother crosses as he waits for her.  
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You responded to this review 08/07/2017 @ 7:29pm EDT