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 | Kyle Gets Lucky  [GC] Kyle enjoys a romantic evening at home — for SCREAMS.  |
| (5.0)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation  OVERALL IMPRESSION - Solid story. Kyle seems to be only concerned with one thing, getting laid. That you showed well as he interacted with everyone at his party, and even the woman who shows up with a gun at the end of the story. WHAT I LIKED BEST - Nice twist at the end. I seriously must have missed that little tidbit of information because I didn't see it coming. PLOT~ Kyle is having a party and is hoping that he finally gets to have sex with Sandy. He's been watching her for a long time, and tonight she is being forward enough that he believes he has a good chance with her. Until Dave interrupts and tells him someone is at the door. Kyle soon discovers the town below is on fire, and his friend Steve has been bitten. Before too long thing spiral out of control. Definitely a good entry for Screams! CHARACTER~ Kyle is obsessed with finally getting some, and thinks he has a chance first with Sandy, and then with Mary Jane before he thinks Sarah would be good for a roll in the hay. DIALOG~ This worked well with all of your characters. Kyle's inner dialogue showed what he was thinking and feeling as events unfolded at his party. TECHNICAL~ wearing an army uniform  
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