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The Prankster  [ASR]
Things a boy does to make people laugh only serve to appease himself and cope with grief.
by Brian K Cognitive Dissonance
Review of The Prankster  
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: ASR
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Hi DBKC / Functional Melancholic, I am reviewing your story "The Prankster" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ I am a bit mixed up in regards to this story. I honestly do not know how to feel. My interpretation of your story was, a man for as long as he's been alive has made people laugh through his antics and humor, but as time goes on he discovers how truly lonely he actually is. He begins to wonder, is this all that I am to them, funny? And then with the rejection of what he feels is all he has from his father further pulls him down into that rabbit hole of rejection.
♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: Your story was cleverly written.
♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common spelling or grammar errors
♥ Overall: The humor is what I initially came for, but I stayed for the emotion. This piece touched me because I was once that funny and clever girl and when that failed me, I thought it was the ultimate rejection, and I felt that I was also forever friend-zoned because of it. So I thank you for sharing your writing with us. I enjoyed your story immensely and I look forward to reading more of your work.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely.

House Greyjoy - "Game of Thrones
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