House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Who's Buzzing?????

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the possibility of either the speak for her friend suffering from dementia.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else in the story that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: I like the description of the UFO abduction because it sounded the way someone would describe it. The friends anger about the author's reaction was frightening because it some of the early signs of Alzheimer's disease. I also like the way the author changed the subject when she realized her friend was serious.

Overall impression: The author, who is the speaker in this nonfiction personal essay is with a friend when the subject of UFO abductions comes up in the conversation. The author's friend tells about being abducted by a UFO in the middle of the night. I found this essay both intriguing, thought provoking, and frightening. The unreasonable anger of the friend was the frightening part because it reminded me of some of my mother's inappropriate anger with Alzheimer's disease. Despite the fact that the anger frightened me, I enjoyed reading this essay about friendship. Write on,.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .