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| (4.5)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation  OVERALL IMPRESSION - This was a sweet story about love that lasts a lifetime. WHAT I LIKED BEST - Liddy really stood out, totally caught up with the idea of love and completely hanging on her grandmother's every word. I liked how the grandmother told Liddy that the shoe maker was her grandfather and Liddy lifted up her skirt to see the evidence for herself. PLOT~ Grandma fills her pipe with tobacco and that is a signal to the grandchildren that she is ready to settle everyone down with one of her stories. She proceeds to tell them about how she wanted a well-crafted pair of shoes and made a deal with the cobbler to make them for her, and in turn, she would help him with a girl he was interested in. CHARACTERS~ The grandmother who becomes animated as she tells the children an old story of something she did when she was younger, and how the story changed her life. Liddy DIALOG~ This worked well between the children and their grandmother. ~~Good solid story about a close family spending time together and gathering around for story time. This brings back memories for me. Nice job. TECHNICAL~ to a wander-wanderer like   
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