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| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation  OVERALL IMPRESSION - Wow, you did a fantastic job with the prompt words for the Daily Flash. These can prove difficult but you managed to really create something profound in three hundred words. Bravo! I felt so bad for your main character as he tried to make sense of everything that happened on this one fateful night. WHAT I LIKED BEST - You worked the title in well at the very end. His future doesn't look bright at this moment and that imagery really pulled it all together. You had really good descriptions, especially as he looks at the prison attire, right down to the brown shoes. PLOT~ A college student goes to a concert and smokes what he believe is marijuana, but it turns out it was laced with PCP. His memories of the events of that night are fuzzy as he finds himself in jail and on trial for the things he did that night. CHARACTER~ I couldn't even imagine what it would be like to think you could never do horrible things and then have to face the fact that video doesn't lie. You gave a good description of him being a happy college student with promise, and now all of that has been taken away. Very powerful piece. Mike may be popular, but what he did had horrific consequences.   
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