House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Kotaro

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Endless Memories

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the roar of a Harley engine.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention. My only suggestion is to use this as a background story to a novel about this infection and the way humans responded.

What part I liked best: I like several things about this story. First, I like the similes and metaphors because they are fresh and expressive. I especially like this metaphor, darkness is pulverized. Second, I like the climax because it suggested the cause of the infection that transformed the humans into vampires. The third thing I like is the title because it suggested a theme without giving away the plot.

Overall impression: Humanity on all continents are infected with a new virus that mutates over time. As it mutates it causes the individuals perception of time to alter. The descriptions are part of the action and moves the plot forward at a good pace while building the suspense. I enjoyed reading this intriguing and thought provoking story. I especially enjoyed the part with the woman because it showed the way the virus effected her and her memories. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .