House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Azrael.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Giveaway

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with his attraction to the stray strands of hair sticking out of the back of her head.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: There are a couple of things I like about this story. First, my favorite idea from the story, "infinite capabilities when science and imagination blends with inspiration". I like this idea because it made me think. Second, I like the twist at the end because it was unexpected but not disappointing. Third, I like the title because it suggested a theme without giving the plot away.

Overall impression: He met her on the street in front of a bookstore that sold antique items. He has to decide if she is one of his people or not. So he take her to the Dead Room to determine who or what she is. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction among the characters builds the suspense. I enjoyed reading this thought provoking story. I am giving this exciting and well-written story a 5.0. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .