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| (5.0)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation  OVERALL IMPRESSION - You worked the prompt words in well in this creepy tale and still you had a good hundred words you could've used, but I read it twice and honestly, this is good without them. WHAT I LIKED BEST - His dismissal of what was really in the water. I was shocked reading what it was actually there as the pieces fit together in my mind. PLOT~ A man stands by the water, looking over the lake knowing the stars are judging him, though he doesn't care. He wishes the sun would never rise and night would remain forever, though that is just a dream for him. CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~ It's odd that he is so calm and collected, though I imagine that is how it is for someone with this kind of mindset. There is no battle in his mind of good versus bad. He is quite comfortable with what he's done. Great descriptions of the lake and the sky dotted with stars. I really liked the depiction of the dark sky filled with stars as if they were eyes looking down at him, never blinking. Then he drives away without a care in the world, probably until the next night comes filled with possibilites. TECHNICAL~ stare down it~at him   
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You responded to this review 08/14/2017 @ 6:11pm EDT