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| (4.5)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation  OVERALL IMPRESSION - A plushie porthole? Okay, that is quite imaginative. WHAT I LIKED BEST - Giving the plushie a voice. That was different and you showed a range of human emotions in the bear. PLOT~ Nellie is excited that it's Friday and she gets to go with Dragon to school, but Dragon insists she can't take her this day. Nellie pouts and tries to guilt Dragon into taking her with her, but Dragon doesn't. When Nellie notices the brownies are gone as well she pouts even more and when Dragon returns home, she refuses to eat or do much of anything. CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~ Nellie who is a plushie bear and used to getting her way. Dragon a college student. It was like trying to rationalize with a child and that played out well. I could easily picture the temper tantrum and melt down that led to Nellie crying herself to sleep. Good descriptions of the way Nellie acted out and how Dragon was more like a mother, going about things that were happening. Cute story. DIALOG~ You made me forget that Nellie was a plushie a few times because the dialog was so natural and really accelerated the story. TECHNICAL~ other plushies gathered around   
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