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| (5.0)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation  OVERALL IMPRESSION - This was a great story. I really enjoyed your take on the prompt and strong women are always appealing. WHAT I LIKED BEST - The tomahawk. Now that was a very creative tool to have. PLOT~ Michelle and her best friend are stranded on an island after running their boat into a reef. The friend seems to be always prepared for just in case incidents, she also is the one out looking for food. Michelle plays her guitar and sings to the ocean as the huntress moves like her cat and beheads an animal for their dinner. CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~ Michelle is more a girly girl and doesn't want to eat anything that once had fur. That made me laugh, how even in dire situations people struggle with letting certain things go. The huntress was great, doing things to make them comfortable for their extended stay. Your setting was great and really drew me into the surroundings of your two main characters. I loved the visual of her being like her cat, crouching, waiting and then pouncing on her prey. Even when describing how Michelle looked like she fit right into her surroundings like in a movie was vivid. DIALOG~ These two seem like they'd be a lot of fun. Dialog was solid and fun. Good job with the prompt. TECHNICAL~ "Well, designing and building   
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You responded to this review 08/19/2017 @ 8:26am EDT