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| (4.5)| Review brought to you by: "Game of Thrones" by Gaby ~ Quiet contemplation  OVERALL IMPRESSION - Interesting story about a drifter who makes a deal with the town and when they don't meet their end of the bargain, they wind up paying a heavy price. WHAT I LIKED BEST - The mystery surrounding the story that kept me guessing right to the end. PLOT~ A drifter named Crazy Eddie is disappointed that the people of the town have made a deal with him, yet haven't paid up. He takes matters into his own hands. The Sergeant begins receiving phone calls about missing children and rushes home to find his son is missing as well. CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~ Crazy Eddie who plays his magic flute and lures all of the children out of bed and led them out of the town of Casper. The Sergeant who rushes home to check on his own son, and meets his frantic wife. They have words and she reminds him that she told them all his surveillance couldn't stop the supernatural. The wife was right. The beginning of the story worked well to pull me into what was happening. I had a definite reaction to what Eddie must have looked like, especially his teeth and finger. DIALOG~ Crazy Eddie vows payback and get is, which was creepy. The Sergeant and his wife share words out on the street. I loved the I told you so statement she made without actually saying the words. Good job with the prompt.   
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