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GRIN & BEAR IT  [ASR]
A "painful" lesson to be learned on the value of planning before action
by DRSmith
Review of GRIN & BEAR IT  
Review by Purple Princess
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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OVERALL IMPRESSION -
This is a great story. I wondered what happened to the Rabbi, and you didn't disappoint in delivering his story.

WHAT I LIKED BEST -
That is story was like an expansion of a joke that begins a Rabbi, a Priest, and a Minister.

PLOT~
At a symposium, a priest, rabbi and minister chat during a meal about how to convert people to their flock. It isn't long before an interesting proposal comes about and all three set out to find a bear to convert. The minister is quick to tell his tale of how he wrestled with the bear and baptized him right on the spot. The priest one upped him with his account of using his silver cross and how it mesmerized the bear enough to throw holy water on him and then read the rosary. As the rabbi is missing, they soon learn he is in the hospital and they rush to check on him.

CHARACTER(S)~DESCRIPTION~
It was so easy to picture this happening. You did a really good job pulling this story altogether and showing the different techniques each used for the purpose of their little bet.

The Rabbi was hilarious in how he decided to go about his task, which turned out to be an epic fail.

DIALOG~
Perfect here as well, giving the rabbi an accent that totally set him apart from the priest and minister. Great job!

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