Hi Writeaway, I am reviewing your poem "Mr. Snail’s Extraordinary Stroll" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ Awww, this Children's short story was too cute! Its about a snail named Mr. Snail. He has a shiny shell, a shell that he personally buffed and shined himself, but he wanted a lady snail friend and none would give him the chance until one day a great storm happened and he saved the day by chancing upon a leaf and offering shelter to the lady snails. After the storm the lady snails became enamored with Mr. Snail because they were safe and dry and he had save their lives.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I have no suggestions for you at this time. Your poem seems to be well written.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: This was a fun little poem. I enjoyed a peek into Mr. Snails life as well as his love life. Thank you so much for writing this short story, it was highly entertaining.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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