Hi Mare, I am reviewing your Dialogue 500 contest entry "Candy Hearts Are For Real" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short story is about a woman and a conversation between her and a "sweetheart", a piece of candy.

The woman is at first skeptical about the power of the candy, but she is very shortly proven that maybe just maybe there is something to what is written on the candy after all. That it is okay to believe in magic.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: This short seems to be well written, I have no specific suggestions for you at this time.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: This was a sweet short in every sense of the word. I love what you did with the story. You reminded adults that sometimes it is okay to believe in a little magic, fantasy, much in the way of a child.

Thank you so much for writing this sweet little gem, I look forward to reading more of your work.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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