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Hi Christianna, I am reviewing your short story "Road Trip" on the behalf of Game of Thrones here on WDC.

♥ This short story about a woman named Anna whose visiting her friend Marsha. Anna decides to call Marsha to let her know that she'd need directions to her home, but the thing is Marsha does not give Anna street names, she gives her landmarks.

Anna was dubious about following the directions at first, but she shortly realized that the land marks given were easy to follow, and that maybe the next that she was giving directions she'd use landmarks too.

♥ Things I noticed/specific suggestions: I have nothing to offer you at this time. You short seems to be well written.

♥ Spelling/Grammar: I did not spot any common grammar or spelling errors.

♥ Overall: This was nice short story about getting lost and whether directions or landmarks were beneficial. I liked what the author did with short in regards to landmarks, I have often found myself remembering a land mark before I had ever remembered a street name. Thank you so much for writing this.

This review was given freely in thanks for a writing that was written freely

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