House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Josh T. Alto.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Wind in the Willows

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the speaker's description of finishing a painting.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: I like both Karen and Michael because they are intriguing and sympathetic characters. Karen is my favorite because she is a creative and strong woman. I also like the way Michael kept his gift a surprise as long as possible.

Overall impression: Karen finishes a painting, and her husband, Michael, comments that it looks like a place on a nearby river that he has been to recently. This gets Karen to wondering about his, recent, mysterious comings and goings.

The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters reveals their personalities, while building the suspense. I enjoyed reading this romantic story because it shows that things are not always as they appear. I am giving this well-written and thought provoking poem a 5.0. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .