House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, GreyJoey.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Suffer the little children

First Impression: The question in the first paragraph hooked me.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: I like Jake because he is an intriguing and sympathetic character who wants to do something about the treatment of children in the world. I, also, like the candle scene because it demonstrated how the hot wax can put out a candle's flame just as tests can put out the flame of faith.

Overall impression: In this character sketch, Jake, is in a church talking to a statue of Christ. Jake is having a crises of faith, and wonders why God does not help the orphans who are dying for lack of food, clothing, and parental protection. After talking to a priest and lighting a candle, Jake decides what he must do. The price to himself is not important as long as he can do something for the children.

The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The interaction and conversation between the characters builds the suspense while revealing the characters faith or lack there of. I enjoyed reading this thought provoking story. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .