House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Kenzie.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Inside and Out.

First Impression: The poem at the beginning of this essay hooked me.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: In the poem, I like the rhyme on the last line of each stanza because it emphasizes the theme of the essay. I like the smooth flow of the narrative from the beginning to the end because it makes the essay easy to read and understand. I, also, like the emphasizes on His Holiness Christ's teaching of love because it goes beyond either religion or race to take in all of humanity. Another thing I like is the things that inspire the author to write because those are some of the same things that inspire me.

Overall impression: In this essay the author emphasizes the importance of loving one another not matter what we look like. Another thing the author emphasizes is that prejudices are learned rather.

I enjoyed reading this inspiring and thought provoking essay. I am giving this well-written and intriguing essay a 5.0. Thank you for sharing the importance of loving one another. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .