House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Yesmrbill.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Minor Works of God

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with the information about where the article was originally printed.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention.

What part I liked best: I like the smooth flow of the narrative from the beginning to the end. I also like the informal first person voice the author used in this essay. The voice suggested that the author was speaking directly to me or another reader. The last thing I like was the emphasize on the simple things we can do. Often times, God does not expect us to perform great works.

Overall impression: In this essay, the author describes the simple acts of God that we can do everyday. In this essay, the author uses examples from his own life to show that it is easy to perform a Minor Work of God every day. The only requirement is to open our eyes and look around at our fellow human beings.

I enjoyed reading this thought provoking essay because it emphasized that each one of us can perform a minor work of God. I am giving this essay a 5.0. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .