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 Two Faces of Power  [E]
Why does an unstoppable force meet an immovable object?
by randomfoibles
In affiliation with The Iron Bank of Braavos  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi, randomfoibles.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.


Title: Two Faces of Power

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Bruce and the Joker being classmates.

What needs your attention: I found no technical problems or anything else that needs your attention. I would like to know if Bruce (batman) ever encountered any other future super villains in his school.

What part I liked best: I like both Bruce and the Joker because they are both intriguing. This story show a side of the Joker that made him appear more sympathetic, while it revealed the opposite about Bruce.

Overall impression: In this story, Bruce (the future Batman) and Joker have a conversation in the cafeteria of the school after Bruce realizes that even though he is a hero his classmates are not pleased with him.

The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense. The interaction among the characters reveal their personalities and help build the suspense. I enjoyed reading this intriguing, thought provoking, and amusing story about Bruce and one of his future numinouses because of the side of the Joker it revealed. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

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