House Florent "Game of Thrones" 

A review for "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 

Hi, Kanish.

My name is Prosperous Snow celebrating , I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Robin's job disatisfaction

First Impression: The first paragraph hooked me with Robin's approach to reading the book on communications.

What needs your attention: The only technical problems I encountered was the spelling of dissatisfaction in the title.

What part I liked best: I like the metaphors in this story because they are fresh and descriptive. I especially like this metaphor, Rat sized butterflies droned about in Robin's belly. I, also, like the sentence about hell being meaningless and pointless. I like Robe because he is a sympathetic character.

Overall impression: Robin is nervous, and having difficulties communicating. The book he purchased was too uninteresting for him to read. Robin goes to the bed of his next case, but has difficulty communicating to the old man what is going to happen.

The descriptions are part of the action, and move the plot forward at a good pace, while building the suspense. The interaction among the characters reveals Robin's communications problems, it, also, helps build the suspense, I enjoyed reading this amusing story because it was well-written with good characters. Write on.

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .