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| This is your local Simply Positive Reviewer, here! Your writing has been selected for review, as part of Simply Positive's mission to bring more light on Authors here at WDC! First Impressions: Hello, and thank you for allowing me to read and review your awesome, awesome poem entitled: "Invalid Item" . Truth be told, this poem had me at "Wow!"  This poem was like something that pulled at my heartstrings, took my by hand alongside this darkened Path that no one else had ever trod before...And it is not only metaphorically TRUE that Paths can have had no one trek across them before for, because philosophically speaking, is it not true that each of us are purely unique and original beings? Thus, any Path that exists, has never had the likes of us walk this way before as well? So, in my mind's eye, within my Muse, I recognized my world within this veritable storm of poetry, and therein lies the key of what it is that makes poetry so special! It is the fact that we relate to it on so many levels that makes poetry so unique, and this poem is no exception! Overall Impact: One feels drawn toward the person in this poem, allows for us to be sympathetic towards someone who has never walked alone before, never found their lives completely solo... never had to find their way in the lonely world before... And the storm is involved, the metaphorical storm that arises from perhaps nowhere, but the person in the poem knows full well that the storm is arising and soon. Before we can prepare, we are swept up into this world of great flashes of lightning, blinded by the experience of a turbulent Life, and how harrowing it is to be subjected to this! We after all, recognize the person in this poem as ultimately being.....................ourselves... Errors: No obvious errors found in this poem. Summation:I wasn't prepared to discover a Newbie within the "crowd" here on WDC that had such command, such poetic prowess... as this author!  I was completely taken in within the words that were/are/always shall be so very relevant to my Muse! Great work, great writing and we shall discover that this author will go on to bigger and better poetry writing in the days ahead, I certainly hope!  KEEP WRITING!! Once again, thank you for providing me the opportunity to read and review for Simply Positive; this also has been written in affiliation with
Yours, "Dr.J"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/11/2017 @ 7:47am EDT