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 A Beautiful Journey   [13+]
Chapter 1: The Beginning (Part 1)
by Valkyr
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Valkyr


This is your local Simply Positive Reviewer, here! Your writing has been selected for review, as part of Simply Positive's mission to bring more light on Authors here at WDC!

First Impressions: Hello, and thank you for allowing me to read and review your work entitled: "A Beautiful Journey " . This is a very, very brief story, but continues an absolute wonder. The absolute wonder, I confess, is perfect. The absolute wonder is....LIFE!

We are treated to a brand new world, just beginning, whereby surely enough, from an incomplete formation, this child will have a beating heart in no less than nineteen days.

If that isn't a miracle...I don't know what is....



Overall Impact: Each one of us reading this story comes to an abrupt, very reasonable conclusion.

That is a child growing in that womb.....

And more importantly, it cannot be said enough times....

without question, I - like everyone else - arrived from the very same place...

Could a story have any more impact upon us... even if we tried?!?




Errors: None found in this story today.




Summation: I love stories based on reality, based on Life. We have so much in the way or resources, yet, sometimes I wonder if this world has lost its bearings, that somehow material wealth, the extrinsic, has superceded the value of living, the intrinsic.

IN all truth, I fear that that is the case. This story brings us back to square one, where it all began. What I think this world needs is plenty of this reality, and in doing so, will get back to revering Life.

Its all we have, in all honesty, because it is true - we cannot take it where we are going later on....


KEEP WRITING!




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