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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week. Thanks for entering!

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* This is an engaging poem about little girls playing dress up in their mother's closet area. I think all little girls have their moments sneaking in among Mama's grownup things! I bet a lot of people will readily identify with the excitement of such an adventure.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"I tried it all on, you can imagine;
Bags, and shoes and makeup too.
By the time I heard the keys
I had on a high-heeled shoe."

It reminded me of days in the past with Mama's pearls and shoes. It's a lovely memory and you poetically capture it very well!

Very fine!

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tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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