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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* We don't always use our heads when we go out in search of walking things off and thinking. This is a cautionary poem about the things that can lurk out there in the dark. You may leave the house afraid of one thing and return with a whole new set of fears if you are lucky enough to return.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

I liked this part a lot:

"so everything your mother said
was not the truth complete
for there are those little monsters
just to your toes they want to eat. "

I particularly liked the way you reversed "truth" and "complete" from the order I would normally expect. It works wonderfully well and advances the rhyme in a natural and engaging way.

Fine poem!

*Thumbsup*

tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 

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