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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Andy~hating university ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

I am reviewing your work as part of the activity "Invalid Item"  with team StarGazers Inc. to get you free from jail so you will be seeing more of me in your inbox *Bigsmile*.

I was searching for something to review from your portfolio when I saw the Muse Masters Folder that I hadn't noticed before in your portfolio, maybe you had it on private, nevertheless I wanted to see what kind of poems you had here. I joined Muse Masters really late which meant that I spent less time in muse masters before it was shut down and I didn't take part in the Muse Masters Campfire or other activities either.

The cover photo made me laugh and so did the title where you mention they are not turtles. Only those who have seen the cartoons and the movie would know they are more than just turtles. It reminded me of Rocket from Guardians of the Galaxy who is constantly referred to as a raccoon *Laugh*.

I wasn't aware of the form used, thank you for saving me the trouble of searching it on google *Bigsmile*. It seems like a very interesting form but one I wouldn't attempt except for something special because I absolutely hate iambic pentameter and I can never understand it, no matter what I do.
You, on the other hand, did a great job with it, and although it is a simple poem, the wording and the form used enhance your poem and work very well with it.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Write On!
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