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Review of Kissed By Fire  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
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Hi Shaye ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

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I was searching for something to read when the title of your poem grabbed my attention and I was completely captivated by it and wanted to see what kind of a poem you had here. Fire has been used in many forms, both literal and metaphoric, in poetry. It usually represents anger, rage and wrath but at other times, it also represents passion and strength.

The way you have used fire in your poem, the reader guessed from the title that it was related to passion. Another interpretation of the title of your poem could be fire as revenge. I found this in free form poetry but for reason, I think I have seen or heard about similar type of poetry form which repeats itself. Nevertheless, it was a good experiment. The pace was fast but it wasn't bad. The flow of your poem was good, the vocabulary you had used was casual and worked great for your work.

My favourite lines were:

fire's pleasant kiss
pure pain.

which kind of reminded me of the phrase 'don't play with fire' *Pthb*.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Write On!
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