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Review of Battling BiPolar  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you. I've read a few more of your stories and I thought that the stories that you have here are really beautiful.

*CupcakeV* First Impression : This poem is significant not only the words but also the rhyming. I like this thoughtful shape poem.

*CupcakeV*The poem: this poem is about bipolar disorder. I can relate your poem because I have a friend who has bipolar disorder. The good news is that there are many medicines that can help reduce bipolar.

I like the way you have crafted your words in this poem. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful.

The flow of this poem like the floating sea wave.

*CupcakeV*Favorite Lines :
“So I sit alone with my broken emotions,
pray to God, and read daily devotions.
My world may be full of strife,
but I’ll be set free in the afterlife.”

*CupcakeV* Overall Impression : A beautiful poem. I enjoyed your poem.

Keep up the good work, and best of luck with all of your writing.

Happy Writing!

Mina  

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