Hello!wolf

It's been a pleasure to review your story on behalf of the “"SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP" . This review for "The Flowering Crab" 

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting to you. I've read a few more of your poems and I thought that the poems that you have here are really beautiful.

First Impression : I like the beautiful images the poet have painted here. I like the opening and the humorous ending.

The poem: this poem is about a tree that gave the poet's heart pleasure. The plot is extremely simple but beautiful. The poet watched a tree outside his window turned a bright pink in the early spring which has given comfort to the poet.

I like the way you have crafted your words in this poem. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful. I like the lines
“Within the growing tree some birds would sing,
A rope is hanging down to hold my swing,”

Overall Impression : A beautiful poem. I enjoyed your poem.

Happy Writing!

Mina  

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