This is a nice story. It is well crafted and written with a creative imagination. The author dreams of people he knows. Brandon is one, Brona is another. Perhaps, he spends his time thinking about them. They fascinate and amuse him. The descriptions of people and their situations are very vivid. There is meticulousness in the writing. Brona is another character he describes with affection. Keaton he thinks and ponders about. Brona and Keaton are affectionate of each other. They hold hands. Their encounter is written with lazy charm. The writing is capable of being written into a more full fledged fiction or story novel.