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 Pain, A Snapping, Snarling Cur  [E]
Just some thoughts in response to a Writer's Cramp prompt, "He was very sneaky."
by SandraLynn Team Florent!
Review by ♥Hooves♥
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week" . Thanks for entering!

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* Pain is definitely something that does sneak up on one in the most insidious manner. One day you have none of it and the next, you can barely get around. Yes, I too have experienced this nasty phenomenon.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

Unyielding, a rock,
Pain's not suffered meekly.
Never did he knock.
He was very sneaky.

Anyone who has been there will readily identify. I like the way this flows and also the third line there where you changed the order of the words to quite effectively convey the inescapable web of pain.

Very fine poem!

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tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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