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| (4.5)  I am also reviewing this Plushie story, because I was volunteered to be a "Goose" over at "Invalid Item" .   "Plushie City" I have to agree with Axl on this ... "That is just wrong! Plain wrong." How could you have that song plushified in such a way?   Okay, this is a fine story for a youth to sink his or her teeth into. It is especially exciting to those who collect Plushie toys and Webkins. I am not one of them. I actually choke-up when reading cute stuff, and I don't mean in a good way. It brings tears to my eyes, but that's because they are bleeding. Otherwise, this was such an enjoyable fantasy read! Seriously, Dragon, you bring the fantasy world alive with your assorted characters intermingling. I also cringed at all the licking going on around there ... thankfully I reminded myself that this was meant in a pet sort of way and not the adult way. Although, placing it in another storyline in my mind, did help a little. Observations: Annnd the only dreams I have about Hi-5 would be nightmares," Mini Axl concluded, I think all the over-emphasized words should be placed in italics, to show the reader it is what it is and not a typo, or falling asleep at the keyboard whilst your finger rested on the lestter "n."  There are several lines that are repetitive, since the subject matter was discussed in a previous paragraph. However, I am assuming that since this was written in August, it was for "Game of Thrones" , and understand that word count equals points, and our team won, so you are forgiven such a transgression in the writing arena.  I did manage to get through the cuteness. I think there are so many characters to keep straight in this story. However, if they are known to the reader through their own collections or their children's, then it is easier to follow. But it does have the rainbow capturing tale that would make a youth smile and dive right in.  Thank heavens you put a likeness of Axl Rose into the story. That made it easier on my eyes, and music played within my head to help get me through to the end. I did it! And it's all your fault, Dragon! Good job!  Until next time--write on! Regards, WebWitch   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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