Hello!
I read your "THE LADY ON THE CORNER, a narrative" 

It's been a pleasure to review your story on behalf of Simply Positive Group.
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

First impression: This is a good about a lady who spends a lot of time on the street corner. I love your story because of the concept.

The story: I always wonder how some people are so bad at the helpless poor women. I felt sorry for Alice.

You give a good description to this character for example where you wrote “Her clothes are outdated and mismatched -- pink pants too short and too tight. Her sore feet are graced by a scruffy pair of sneakers. Though Alice doesn't smell like roses and is grimy for lack of a bath, she resembles a well-loved doll, a beauty aged by the passing of time.”

I like the happy ending of this story.

Suggestion: I think you need a paragraph break to make your story more interesting.

Overall: Nice concept. I especially like the central character Alice. I like the way how you wrote all these.

Happy Writing!

Mina  

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