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Review of THE DANCER  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* You visited me with a nice review recently so here I am to visit you.

Your entry in The Writer's Cramp today was marked private so I couldn't read it.

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I thought about how as we get a bit older we see ourselves in the next generation. It is like we want to reach out and share what we know, but they have to learn it for themselves. That is the way it is with daughters, anyway. Maybe someone who is not related would take better to well-meant advice.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"But each morning I will watch her
dancing down the street
and wish for her to "just have fun".
while you still have two working feet."

I wouldn't want to trade places with the young version of me, but I wish I could impart some of the wisdom of age to my goofy younger self.

Fine poem!

*Thumbsup*

tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

"Avoiding Toothless Rabid Bullies & Such" 

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