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 Just a Poem   [E]
This is just something I happened to think up while I was bored in English class.
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Review of Just a Poem  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow*I saw your poem featured in this week's Poetry Newsletter and came to read. Congratulations on being featured in the Newsletter! And welcome to the site!

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think that this proves you don't have to have a lot of words to say something quite profound.

Time is relentless and unforgiving. It's passage is the one thing that we can count on absolutely in life.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

This was my favorite part:

"Even now, it moves ever onward,
Not pausing once for friend or foe.
End - of time, that is - is nowhere in sight.
Not for us mortals, at least."

And it tells us all we need to know if we only are patient and attentive.

Fine work!

*Thumbsup*

tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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