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Hi Monty ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

Happy WDC Anniversary! *Bigsmile* I am reviewing your work as part of the "Anniversary Reviews" . I was searching for something to read from your portfolio when I saw this one. I love reading nature poems and particularly ones which are about seasons and in seasons, I love winter. However, I do read other nature poems and when I saw this, I knew I had to come and take a look at it.

The way you worded the short description of your poem was very beautiful especially the words 'mother nature comes with her seasons brush.'

The first stanza was light, a good way to open your poem capturing the colours of autumn and how beautifully Mother Nature changes her dresses and setting in every different season, even on every different and new day. Time goes on but the rhythm and the beauty in Mother Nature never reduces and continues to amaze its audience.

It's unfortunate people today do not take time out of their robotic and hectic life to appreciate the simple, heart touching spectacles of nature around us, even for a minute. I used to watch sunrise and sunset whenever I got the chance but it has been so many years since I last watched one and I miss it. The ones I watched were absolutely beautiful. I have wanted to see it again but I am always asleep at sunrise and even if I try to get up, I cannot because I am simply too exhausted and sleepy.

The way you have shared your memories about autumn was very fresh and vivid. Where I live, there is never a pile of leaves in Autumn but yes, leaves do fall. I have always wanted to feel how it felt jumping in them but haven't. It's on my bucket list *Bigsmile*. You shared a part of that joy, that feeling with me while I was reading the second stanza. The last line of your poem was absolutely beautiful. The flow of your poem was perfect, there was no interruption and the vocabulary you had used in your poem was strong, suitable and built a beautiful image in the reader's mind. Well done!

My favourite lines were:

Red, yellow, orange, Mother Nature paints all
Leaves are more beautiful, the colors of Fall.
We would rake the leaves in a pile up just so,
Then would laugh and play and jump in them


Once again, a very happy WDC Anniversary to you!

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Write On!
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