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 Tap, Tap, Tap  [13+]
Screams entry, prompt info below, word count: 582
by NeedingBeachDuf 🐠⛵🏝️
Review of Tap, Tap, Tap  
Review by ~ Aqua ~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hi NeedingBeachDuf 🐠⛵🏝️ ! I am Aqua and the following are only my personal opinions. Ultimately, you and only you can decide what works best for your item.

Happy WDC Account anniversary! I am reviewing your work as part of "Anniversary Reviews"  and Twelve Labourers of WDC. I was searching for something to read from your portfolio when this caught my attention with the mysterious and intriguing title you have for your story.

The prompt that you wrote the story on was very interesting and I had a lot of horro and scary ideas in my mind. This was a very good fictional piece that had the reader hooked right from the beginning. You know, once I found mirrors very creepy, especially at night. whenever I used to go to the bathroom, I turned on the light and dropped by head and walked past the mirror. God, that used to scare me, a lot! That was a few years ago, and it was probably the result of watching the horror movie where the woman comes out of the mirror and Oculus. Anyway, good thing that I no longer feel that way about mirrors *Laugh*.

The starting of your work was very good. I was confused with the starting line but as I read, I understood the meaning you had tried to convey in the sentence and its structure. The reader is engaged in your story, all her attention into it, wondering what would happen in the end and the ending was nothing but mystery! Thank God, though, that nothing happened to the 56 year old and that the woman ran away. It has given me an idea for a story!

The flow of your story was very good, there was no interruption of any sort. There were no grammatical errors that I spotted, nor any typos. Well done!

Once again, a very happy WDC anniversary!

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Write On!
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