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What brought tHiNg to glide in a space time continuum over to your port?

*Cow* I am the judge for today in "The Writer's Cramp - Poetry Week. Thanks for entering!

What does tHiNG think about while perusing your item?

*Cool**Idea* I think it is never too late to feel close to someone and to get beyond a grudge toward forgiveness. This is especially true when there is a family bond. We never know when fate will take a loved one away. I do believe that love survives everything, including death. Otherwise, I don't see the point to much about relationships and growing as a person.

What does tHiNG applaud about while reading your item?

Your protagonist grew as he realized the love he held for his mother. I thought the dedication was beautiful and heartfelt. The prompt inspired you to write about how important it is to forgive in a timely way, but also opens the door for forgiving oneself.

Nicely done!

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tHiNG a.k.a. 4ps a.k.a. HOOves

P.S. I am someone who loves to read and review. That is a pretty simple statement and it is true, in the spirit of Ernest Hemingway, who once said, "Write one true thing." *Heart*

Ta Ta until we meet again in another place and time....

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