The title and theme appealed to me as positive and inspirational. We need to praise and be be proud of our gifts more often! In your short three line poem you share how it feels to be celebrating you! The words "joyful" and being filled with glee give a sense of that jubiliant feeling. They have similar meaning and yet repeating the idea gives emphasis.

Using the word today keeps it in the present moment too, which is all we have really and if each moment we carry this joy, it can lead to the next creation.

I think you need a comma after "happy".

I was wondering if there were any achievements in particular you were celebrating, though I think just celebrating our own BEING is what it is about, no matter what we DO.

Thanks for the cheery reminder!

You responded to this review 10/15/2017 @ 9:52pm EDT

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