I think your article makes a good point about creating an interesting and unique essay to perk up the one reading through so many. I like the way ask a question to involve the reader and to get them pondering by saying "Imagine". The use of long and short lines makes it fun to read. The sound and notion of "crowd of candidates" is a vivid image too.
I really enjoyed reading the first paragraph as it engaged me.

Your second paragraph suggests where one can get help with essay writing. The idea that this help could make life easier may be appealing to potential clients. I wonder if adding some ways that you might help- a few specifics of what you do, may also give weight to the invitation.

The title is specific to the theme and I am not sure the essay genre fits the work as it is more of an article or ad.

Thanks for sharing your vision and the link.

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