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Review of Starting Over  
Review by Lonewolf
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!


*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Excellent take on the Photo Prompt.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Person* [Character]
Lord Breach, Princess Lorna, and Raven were all great characters for this story. I loved the interactions with all of them, especially Princess Lorna and Raven.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I wasn't sure what I was going to find when I began reading your story. What I did find a an excellent read. I enjoyed the journey Princess Lorna made in the decision to go ahead and move her people. I really wanted to know more about the world they were on and the enemy they faced, not to mention I wanted to know more about where they would ultimately end up, and what happened with Lord Breach and his men. Well done!


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