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 They Walk Amongst Us --Even Now  [E]
Slightly fictionalized version. I did spend months on my own at 16; one could back then.
by fyn
Review by Lonewolf
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!


*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Excellent use of the Photo Prompt.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Person* [Character]
I enjoyed the character you created for this contest. She came off genuine and it was easy to relate to her situation.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I thought this was a sweet story that used the Photo Prompt really well, especially the ending. It was a fantastic read. Well done!


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