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Goodbye Tears, Hello Wonder  [13+]
Battle of the Persian Gates (Susian Gates). Alexander attacks the Persian city Persepolis.
by Kotaro
Review by Lonewolf
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!


*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Wonderful use of the Photo Prompt.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Person* [Character]
Farhad was perfect for this story. I loved his devotion for his family, and the interactions he had with his friends.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I thought this was an excellent story making great use of the Photo Prompt. It reminded me a lot of 300, and made me hope for a different outcome, but also made me want to read more of his story. Well done!


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