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Review of The Ruins  
Review by Lonewolf
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest" . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck!


*Pencil* [Overall Impression]
Perfect use of the Photo Prompt.

*Tools* [Spelling Errors/Grammar]
None that I could find.

*Person* [Character]
James and his Dad were perfect for this short story. I loved their interaction about history.

*Pencil* [Ending Thoughts]
I thought this was a sweet little story with a cute ending that I wasn't expecting. I wish it had been longer, but what you created was good enough. Well done!


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