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 Review #4367436 |
| Hello, I am reviewing your story as a judge for "Short Shots: Official WDC Contest"  . Thanks for entering! It has been a pleasure to read and review your work, please remember any thoughts or suggestions written or implied in my review are based only on my opinion. Thank you for entering and Good Luck! [Overall Impression] Interesting take on the Photo Prompt.  [Spelling Errors/Grammar] None that I could find.  [Character]Annbis, Thoth, Ammit, and Cleopatra were written excellently. I enjoyed the interactions between all of them. Cleopatra was written not only with style and grace, but also with a commanding respect which was great. [Ending Thoughts] There wasn't a description of the image, but the content of the story as a whole I think provided the proper reference to what the image contains. The way Cleopatra was written was perfect. I wanted to read more once I was finished. Well done!  
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You responded to this review 10/18/2017 @ 4:24am EDT